Let the Sueness commence!
Name: Jessica Potter
This is not going to be a good review.
Nickname: Jessie, Jay (given to me by Fred and George)Jess, and Fox (given to me by Harry)
Why the freak does Harry call her fox. She better not be an animagus or I will....
Blood Status: Half blood
House: Gryffindor
Age: 15
Year: Same as when the Golden Trio was in fifth year
Wand Type: 11 inches, oak and phoenix tail feather core
Pet: A great horned owl named Pippen
Patronous: A wolf
Birthday:October 31st 1980
Quidditch Position: Chaser
Because screw all the cannon chasers!
Personality: I never back down from a fight, people know that if they get in my face I am not afraid to get into theirs. I am kind of a prankster but I know when to be mature, I am a good listener and I don't openly trust people, I am protective of my family and am loyal to my friends/family to death.
So basically she is a female version of Harry. We get that she's his sister, but come on can you come up with a more original personality?!
Looks: I have long wavy black hair that falls to the small of my back, it is normally down or in a braid. I have almond shaped emerald greed eyes with thick eyelashes. I have fairer skin with full red lips. I have an athletic build and I am strong even though I am told I am petite. I have long legs that are meant for running. I can turn into a wolf because I am an animagus.
I don't know how many times I have to say this but here I go, again IT TAKES A LOT OF SKILL AND TALENT TO BECOME AN ANIMAGUS, YOU CANT JUST GO " I WANNA BECOME AND ANIMAGUS, GUESS I BETTER GO TO THE LIBRARY" JESUS CHRIST!
Now that thats done, why does she have long legs meant for running but is for some reason petite?
Family: I am the twin sister of Harry Potter and our parents died when we were young. I went to the Weasley family and lived with them. I am friends with the Golden Trio and many others in Hogwarts. I don't care what their blood status is or what house they are in.
Why did Dumbledore not send her to live with the Dursley's after James and Lily died, with Harry? Oh wait, why did I even ask. She is just to speshul for the treatment the Dursley's would have given her so she went to live with the Weasley's instead. Because that makes sense. Gosh, I already hate this oc...
Background: I am the twin sister of Harry Potter and our parents died when we were one. I was put with the Weasley's because Dumbledore wanted us separate.
SCREW CANNON, SCREW LILY'S BLOOD PROTECTION, SCREW EVERYTHING! But wouldn't she have to live with Petunia and Vernon like Harry for Lily's blood protection to stay strong?
I grew up at the burrow knowing I was different. But I knew I was a witch, Mr and Mrs. Weasley told my I was sister to Harry when I was seven. They didn't want me to tell the others, they wanted me to wait until I met Harry for the first time. So the Weasley children just thought I was adopted for some unknown reason. When I finally go to Hogwarts I met Harry for the first time. I joined the quidditch team with him because I am a great flyer and they needed a new chaser. In our third year I told him we were related and he told me he had a feeling we were more than just friends we were family.
That year I figured out that I was an animagus but I didn't want to tell anybody. I helped Harry through the twi-wizard tournament our fourth year. And I asked Fred to the Yule Ball. That is my life up until fifth year.
Wow I wonder who she's in love with?
Love Interest: Fred Weasley
Weaknesses: I am very protective of my family and if anything were to happen to them I would die. I can be quick to judge no matter how hard I try not to and I have a quick temper. And sometimes I can let my feelings get in the way but that is rarely.
She is literally a female Harry, this oc has no originality whats so ever! This could have been okay if she hadn't piled on a bunch of crap to make her oc super speshul.
THE SPESHULNESS OF LE SPESHUL!!!
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